I am surrounded
surrounded by the world that he has created.
The world that he drew and shaded.
And we are his puppets
We must do as he say
or else there is nothing, but death in our way.
Still there is something inside of me
that's saying this is not right
that there is a different path that can take me to the light.
But he's controlling my thoughts
holding me down
from loving, thinking, trusting.
But why?
Can't I just get up and deny
what if everything he said was a lie.
If everything is a lie
then why are we bowing to his feet
is this the sign of our defeat.
Buy why?
Why do I look in the mirror
and see what he wants me to see.
Can't I just for once see
what I look in reality.
This poem is written by me about the events going on in my novel, specifically with the protagonist so far. As the main character in my novel is having a self vs self-conflict with himself of whether he should support Big Brother or no and he is trying to find out the reality of the past. The poem is about living under a dictator and for my novel is written in the protagonist's perspective, therefore it is similar to the reading as the poem talks about how the people, including the main character, are Big Brothers puppets, meaning under his rulership and that they have to do as he says, or else they get killed. The poem also states that the main character is rising up and getting thoughts of not bowing down to Big Brother and whether everything Big Brother said had been a lie.This is a state of development of the main character as he is getting questions and thoughts of why Big Brother is doing all this. Also, he wants to what the reality is and whether he is against or with Big Brother, just like its said in the poem.
This pic shows the two sides of the persons thinking. I Choose this pic just to advance my point about how the protagonist is double minded or rather confuses of whether he should be with Big Brother or not.
surrounded by the world that he has created.
The world that he drew and shaded.
And we are his puppets
We must do as he say
or else there is nothing, but death in our way.
Still there is something inside of me
that's saying this is not right
that there is a different path that can take me to the light.
But he's controlling my thoughts
holding me down
from loving, thinking, trusting.
But why?
Can't I just get up and deny
what if everything he said was a lie.
If everything is a lie
then why are we bowing to his feet
is this the sign of our defeat.
Buy why?
Why do I look in the mirror
and see what he wants me to see.
Can't I just for once see
what I look in reality.
This poem is written by me about the events going on in my novel, specifically with the protagonist so far. As the main character in my novel is having a self vs self-conflict with himself of whether he should support Big Brother or no and he is trying to find out the reality of the past. The poem is about living under a dictator and for my novel is written in the protagonist's perspective, therefore it is similar to the reading as the poem talks about how the people, including the main character, are Big Brothers puppets, meaning under his rulership and that they have to do as he says, or else they get killed. The poem also states that the main character is rising up and getting thoughts of not bowing down to Big Brother and whether everything Big Brother said had been a lie.This is a state of development of the main character as he is getting questions and thoughts of why Big Brother is doing all this. Also, he wants to what the reality is and whether he is against or with Big Brother, just like its said in the poem.
